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The Running Away Boat.

The boat was bored staying in the harbor.
He decided to go into the open sea.
It's so fun to play race with the dolphins!
It's so fun to catch fish!
Suddenly the wind blew and raised the high waves.
The sky was dark. How would the boat get home?
But then a light cut through the clouds.
That was the lighthouse. Yay! The boat swam for the light.
And soon was back in the harbor.
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Комментарий члена жюри: Элисон Прайс-Ром (Alison Price-Rom)
27/03/2018
Very good for 7 years, although the English was not always idiomatic. For example, the title should read something like "run-away boat"
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